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Will You Marry Me?
By Robin Nederlof.
When we met, time went so fast.
Once again life had meaning and color.
Who would have thought our relation would last.
Together we were happy, no one should bother.
Through many things we went.
The fights, discussions and moody days.
Loads of things happened that we didn't planned.
But we got through like the January's February's and the May's.
So, I just want to ask you.
Can we live on like this forever?
The sky will always be blue.
None of our imperfections should matter.
I want to give you this ring.
A token of my love and gratitude.
It's not a fact though it's a thing.
But my love is a fact and it feels real good.
To keep the ring on will take a lot of care.
Like I care about the promises I told.
With me you will always be warm, I swear.
I will never let you feel cold.
All these words are no lies to you or me.
Just take a good look in my eyes and you will see.
I think this is the right moment to ask, will you marry me?
By Robin Nederlof.
When we met, time went so fast.
Once again life had meaning and color.
Who would have thought our relation would last.
Together we were happy, no one should bother.
Through many things we went.
The fights, discussions and moody days.
Loads of things happened that we didn't planned.
But we got through like the January's February's and the May's.
So, I just want to ask you.
Can we live on like this forever?
The sky will always be blue.
None of our imperfections should matter.
I want to give you this ring.
A token of my love and gratitude.
It's not a fact though it's a thing.
But my love is a fact and it feels real good.
To keep the ring on will take a lot of care.
Like I care about the promises I told.
With me you will always be warm, I swear.
I will never let you feel cold.
All these words are no lies to you or me.
Just take a good look in my eyes and you will see.
I think this is the right moment to ask, will you marry me?
Literature
mother
mother with whistle, button and mace
drops her weapons to the hospital floor
and screams.
father rejoices - a princess! i'll teach her
everything.
mother still screams.
father, laughing - i pity the boy who asks for her hand.
mother holds baby and shrieks.
father's skin crawls - why aren't you happy?
mother screams. mother howls. mother, inconsolable
(everyone dies but girls are always
born dead)
Literature
One for Dad
I was back in the house where I could feel the melancholy
of the lonesome, crowded west.
The same house but all the memories seemed so far away.
The smell of fresh paint hung heavy in the air,
and the walls I had once scratched and dented were bare.
A film of neglect clung to the books he never let me touch,
“Always end up damaged.” he’d say.
Not realising that love changes things,
makes friendships stronger, give things sentiment.
Those worn covers and creased pages,
not a sign of carelessness but a sign of greatest care.
There were the bottles of wisdom placed in the cellar,
full of learning, but paling to the lesso
Literature
Father
She must have been
beautiful
sugar sweet
perfect
as you dressed her in innocence.
I'm sure her hair smelled of better times
and her eyes tugged at your conscience
and promised worlds
that made yours seem tragically thin.
And you were ...
weak
Now tell me, (father)
what broke your heart?
To find out you were the perfect liar?
Or to speak that ugly truth
that smashed everything
to blood-drawing shards of memories?
Because I don't need
your second-hand love
anymore.
I know, one day
you will contemplate gravity's fragilty
and fall into the sky
while we lie sleepless through nights gone hollow
with a bullet for the pain
an
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It's basicly a proposal in poem style.
PS : if anyone decides to use this poem as a proposal or already did ! Let me know, send me a note or something! (if I ever want to use it myself, I must know if it works haha)
PS : if anyone decides to use this poem as a proposal or already did ! Let me know, send me a note or something! (if I ever want to use it myself, I must know if it works haha)
© 2005 - 2024 Robino
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if i ask for marriage with this poem, even Sharon Stone will marry me
it is just gRRRrreat man!
it is just gRRRrreat man!