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Will You Marry Me?

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Will You Marry Me?
By Robin Nederlof.

When we met, time went so fast.
Once again life had meaning and color.
Who would have thought our relation would last.
Together we were happy, no one should bother.

Through many things we went.
The fights, discussions and moody days.
Loads of things happened that we didn't planned.
But we got through like the January's February's and the May's.

So, I just want to ask you.
Can we live on like this forever?
The sky will always be blue.
None of our imperfections should matter.

I want to give you this ring.
A token of my love and gratitude.
It's not a fact though it's a thing.
But my love is a fact and it feels real good.

To keep the ring on will take a lot of care.
Like I care about the promises I told.
With me you will always be warm, I swear.
I will never let you feel cold.

All these words are no lies to you or me.
Just take a good look in my eyes and you will see.

I think this is the right moment to ask, will you marry me?
It's basicly a proposal in poem style.

PS : if anyone decides to use this poem as a proposal or already did :P ! Let me know, send me a note or something! (if I ever want to use it myself, I must know if it works haha)
© 2005 - 2024 Robino
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artlover82's avatar
if i ask for marriage with this poem, even Sharon Stone will marry me :D

it is just gRRRrreat man!