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Medicine:
By Robin Nederlof.

You said you had enough of me.
But I can't believe what you said.
Cause the thing we had wasn't that bad.
Like when you lie, I wouldn't see.
I am like a disease that's always coming back
When you think you are cured I will be there.
In your mind, your thoughts, everywhere.
And put your brains back on track.

I got to tell you this, I saw you last night.
Your hair reflected in the beautiful moonlight.
But you didn't look happy or content.
You tried to look so, but you are a bad pretend.
It's just like I told you, I will always be hanging around.
When there is silence, I am the sound.
There is no medicine that can cure you from me.
I am the medicine you see.

Maybe you acted in some kind of haste.
You said you didn't want me, but you meant the other way.
Perhaps it's because people think I am kind of crazed.
Circumstances made it hard for you to say.
The truth is you want me more than anything.
You are just afraid of the world around you and the people laughing.
I hope it will help to let you know, I got the same fears.
But seeing you, me, us like this makes me want to burst into tears.

And you can keep using that medicine you have.
Oh please just don't make me laugh.
You know that it won't work as well as I do.
You realize that other men are even more troublesome to you.
So give a good look around and grab your chance.
Maybe one of those eyes will catch a glint or a glance.
A glint of the real medicine, the key.
A glance of the medicine that's called me.
©2005-2009 =Robino
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Author's Comments

It's just a thought I had for a poem, worked it out and this is the result.

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:iconshaggzfate:
if i were giving comments based on a letter based system, this would be an A+. Haha but i'm no teacher, i love the feel of it, and the maniacle feel of it, one of the better poems i've read with out a doubt

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Poetry is emotions.
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Love has found me, but i have yet to find it

~PoetryBattle
:iconkagamutora:
wow nice poem

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Kagamutora
Live Life To The Fullest! Then Do It Again Tomorrow.
:iconfrozendruidess:
Robin I am so proud of you. You really are progressing in your poetry skill. This is truly beautiful.

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Move softly on the ground..." ..."Hush now as the wind blows . Willows sway in time . As one we move with the breeze"...

"Underneath the starry glow, the earth is spinning slow... Dance with the unknown..."- Rhea's Obsession
:iconrobino:
Thx for the nice comments!

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Foolish Brother...If You Want To Kill Me...Then Hate,Spite...And Survive Pathetically. Run And Run...And Cling Desperately To Life.
:iconchamelon:
i love the second verse :)

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THATS A LOT OF NUTS!
:iconlepratweek:
I cannot read another poem with the word "YOU" in it.

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Chapel Perilous = Best Band EVER!
:iconrobino:
So you don't like it?

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Foolish Brother...If You Want To Kill Me...Then Hate,Spite...And Survive Pathetically. Run And Run...And Cling Desperately To Life.
:iconlepratweek:
I can't read it without getting frustrated. ...but that is not to say I don't like it....Anger and frustration where spewing this nasty overplayed word...YOU! When I desire frustration I will adore this piece.

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Chapel Perilous = Best Band EVER!
:iconlonelyxangel:
hmm... it sounds like theres an addiction, something tormenting the soul of this person... Its really well written, and really deep. I like your style here!
:iconserenata:
Good job! I can relate to much of it. It was easy to follow and held my attention. Nice poem!

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