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Dreaming :
By Robin Nederlof.

Breathing in and breathing out.
Sometimes that's what life is all about.
Staring at the wonderful sky.
Dreaming of the days gone by.
Floating on a sea of memory.
Wondering what it has to see.
Just being trapped inside your mind.
Dreaming of the days left behind.

Confusing is what life can be.
We gaze upon the past and flee.
Running from the future and the idea.
Dreaming of the things we want to see.
Sometimes life can confuse us all.
Making us afraid to fail or fall.
Untill we want to think no more
Just to dream of the things we adore.

Reality is where we wake up again.
We go to the mirror and see the real ''I''.
Trying to look the best we can.
But the inside is where we live by.
Other opinions is what we fear.
We lean too much on the things we see.
Just not knowing in which direction we steer.
And we dream on about who we want to be.
©2006-2009 =Robino
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Life is just one big dream...
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~JayDesigns:iconJayDesigns: Jan 30, 2006, 12:19:37 PM
Great Poem, again, your a great poet ! I like poems about life, keep up the great work !

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~jyesunmin:iconjyesunmin: Jan 30, 2006, 11:15:33 PM
nice work. btw which is spelled with an "h"

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Because her purpose is higher,
she will never fit in...
Because her purpose is higher,
she has to sacrifice...
Because her purpose is higher,
she can never be yours...
~Cenestelle:iconCenestelle: Jan 31, 2006, 12:44:53 AM
nice poem

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sing what you can't say,
forget what you can't play,
hasten to drown into beautiful eyes...
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my rulez for life [link]
~hiddenregret:iconhiddenregret: Jan 31, 2006, 1:59:15 AM
:clap: nicely said :)

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A million to one outsiders nightblindness cant see,your bright eyes are what the time is;twenty-five past eternity.
(David Gray-Nightblindness)
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Draw me with your pencil in a different stance for every page in your book. Animate me as you flick
~lady-deathrose:iconlady-deathrose: Feb 2, 2006, 5:47:30 AM
Again, the very things that I like are just these ones, that tell of real life, the feelings that we hide within. It is so easy to see oneself in that, to feel the words of that poem. Especially the beginnings of the first two stanzas I like... This is easy to read, good poem! Actually, tell you what... I like that worth a :+fav:!

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Honesty is the best policy, but insanity is a better defence.
~hippiebuddhist:iconhippiebuddhist: Feb 10, 2006, 3:43:22 PM
But life is but a dream. And these sensory illusions are just conjuations of our dreams. Who can say when we have truely awaken from the dream.

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The future you have tomorrow, won't be the same future you had yesterday.
=Robino:iconRobino: Feb 10, 2006, 3:45:01 PM
interesting huh? :P !

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Foolish Brother...If You Want To Kill Me...Then Hate,Spite...And Survive Pathetically. Run And Run...And Cling Desperately To Life.
~hippiebuddhist:iconhippiebuddhist: Feb 10, 2006, 3:54:24 PM
Random thought that I had while reading it. :shrug: Just one of those moments.

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The future you have tomorrow, won't be the same future you had yesterday.
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